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If I won a trip to Disney World, I would bring Nur Ain. She is my younger sister. She is very funny. She also talkative because she has many ideas to talk with me. She like laugh and can make me happy every time. She doesn’t like drama but she like cartoon especially Walt Disney Series. I hope she is really happy when I bought her.

My Friend in Part 1

This is my friend's, Eja...she is happy go lucky girl.....nice to meet her...